Thursday, 11 September 2014

Goldilocks and the three bears

I have been learning to write complete sentences, add details, and change the beginnings of my sentences. This is a story about Goldilocks. I have not finished it yet but this is what I have done so far.




One summer day there was a boy called L.J . He lived nice in a  house. He saw a duck and he chased after it into the woods. He stopped and started to think in his head that he was lost. Soon he found a betterfull house. He pekt in the window and then he nocked on the door. He decided to go in and it was a 3 bear’s house. He didn’t no it was 3 bears who lived here. He saw 3 yummy sweet bowls of porridge. The first one was too hot the second om he saw 3 chris the first one was too tall the second one was too soft the thread one it was just fine. He was rocking on the chri and then he rock too had that he fell back. And he broke it he felt the first one was too gowe. The thread was just fine so he ate it all. A minute later he went into the sitting room he saw 3 chris the first one was too tall the second one was too soft the thread one it was just fine. He was rocking on the chri and then he rock too had that he fell back.
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