This dangerous puma is so black you can’t see him at night accept the glow of his yellowish eyes. Do not carry raw meat around in your bag on your extreme adventure or look out! The puma can smell from over a mile away. You can never here the fast puma come running towards you on his small padded feet.
I am a Year 8 student at Pt England School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 1 and my teacher is Mr Wiseman.
Thursday, 11 June 2015
Describing My Animal
Today in writing Miss Kyee was teaching us about adjectives. An adjective is a describing word. Here are my sentences with 6 adjectives in them. I have highlighted the adjectives.

This dangerous puma is so black you can’t see him at night accept the glow of his yellowish eyes. Do not carry raw meat around in your bag on your extreme adventure or look out! The puma can smell from over a mile away. You can never here the fast puma come running towards you on his small padded feet.
This dangerous puma is so black you can’t see him at night accept the glow of his yellowish eyes. Do not carry raw meat around in your bag on your extreme adventure or look out! The puma can smell from over a mile away. You can never here the fast puma come running towards you on his small padded feet.
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